tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6847766471903816400.post4429506341143201769..comments2010-09-15T11:55:41.133-07:00Comments on Eternal Dawn and Gloaming: Sometimes We Just Need to be RemindedRyanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09423345754808210784noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6847766471903816400.post-63577580695425690602009-06-18T13:13:28.560-07:002009-06-18T13:13:28.560-07:00The poem's overall theme was autobiographical....The poem's overall theme was autobiographical. However, details such as the sunflower were completely fictional. I've never even been on a train that had flowers next to it (i.e. not elevated or underground).Mikehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17934386917419130389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6847766471903816400.post-73552293370972448392009-06-18T12:46:38.020-07:002009-06-18T12:46:38.020-07:00I'm curious, was there a place along the track...I'm curious, was there a place along the tracks with sunflowers that inspired this poem? Or did that thought come into play after the poem was already taking shape?<br /><br />I really like the second to last line, about really seeing your partner again. It's so easy to see people in labels or past emotional caricatures, that we forget who they really are, what really drives them, and how to connect with them.Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09423345754808210784noreply@blogger.com